Character Profiles for my Mystery Human Transformers Story

Okay like the Title says these are Character Profiles for my Human Transformers Mystery Story. I may also put in a teaser/ prolouge in at the end i'm not sure yet.
Oh Yeah this is a VERY VERY LONG post. So you might want to get a snack and maybe a pillow for your rear.

Now if you've had enough of my little Fangirly outbursts then you can get off right now. It won't hurt my feelings or anything. I'll just know that I'm a nerd who needs to get a life...

Inspiration for this: In English we had to write a mystery story. So here is a longer (Shelby close your mouth.) version of it. NOTE: The original was four pages front and back so when Shelby was reading it she kept asking me how long it was. Also this version is a bit different then the original school assignment, which was rushed because our teacher only gave us one day to write a story.

Copyright: I DO NOT OWN TRANSFORMERS... BUT LIKE EVERY OTHER FANGIRL I WISH I DID. THIS AWESOME JOB GOES TO HASBRO. if i did own them. then... Jazz would not have died in'07, the '86 movie and two seasons after that would not exist, and Prowl would not have died in TFA. The only two i own are Ricochet and Quasar.

Names: Kayl (pronounced Kale) is Ricochet
Sar is Quasar
Spencer is Sunstreaker
Mia is Chormia
Then these names i got from some one on DeviantART i liked them to much and couldn't let them go.
Sid is Sideswipe
Gabriel is Ironhide
Sebastion is Ratchet
Jack is Wheeljack

Kayl
Age: 14
Appearance: Long, Curly, Light and Dark Brown Streaked hair. About 5'1" she be shorter then everyone else. Royal Blue Eyes. Kinda Pale and she has freckles.
Personality And Other: She's artisitc and creative. She has very crazy ideas (like her older brother Jack.) She probably has ADHD...(very, very, very, hyperactive and easily distracted.) Uh... She is very kind and caring. Out of her and her best friend Sar she is the crazy one. Oh yeah, she's very musical and may burst into song or something random at the worst time to lighten the mood. She doesn't think about things first she just does it then goes 'Uh, i that wasn't the smartest thing was it?'

Sar
Age: 15
Appearance: Medium Length, black hair. Dark green eyes. She has tan skin and is about 5'6''
Personality and other: Out of her and Kayl she is the more serious of the two and thinks about things unlike Kayl. She be the brains of the pair. :D She is very nice.

Spencer and Sid
Age: 17 (they be twins) :P
Appearance: It's not very different.. The both have black hair and pale bluprle (blue and purple) eyes and they are about 5'11"
Personality and other: this is where they differ.. Spencer is self centered but cares about his family he's also kinda hot headed. and Sid is the family trouble maker. Spencer isn't usually involved in his pranks but can help unknowingly.

Jack
Age: 17
Appearance: He has light brown hair and royal blue eyes like Kayl. He's about 5'10 3/4". hehe
Personality and other: He's carefree like his sister and just as creative and artistic BUT not with drawing and art and what not... With inventions is his gig....? Where did that come from. He gets kinda anxious and nervous when he has a project and can't get it done which there by makes him grumpy....

Gabe
Appearance: Uhhhhhh.... Tall, light gray eyes, Black hair he's like 6' something".
Personality and other: Kind but grumpy... (What can i say he's Ironhide.)

Sebastion (I have a VERY strong urge to call him Seabass... and i don't know why. Is it because of the Ice Cream i ate earlyer today?) (Ratchet in the far corner of my mind: HEY!!!)
Appearance: 'bout the same as Gabe but a bit shorter
Personality and other: Just like Gabe

Then the side characters are Mia and Camille (Camille is a french name and pronounced Ca-Mi. It's my french name.)

The big, ol' happy, non sarcastic, loving family. Okay i could NOT type that with a straight face. Bahahaha okay i feel better. Okay here is how the family works out: Gabe and Seabass are brothers. Jack and Kayl's mom was theirs sister. Gabe and Mia are married. Seabass's wife and Jack and Kayl's parents died in a plane crash a LONG time ago. Seabass and Izzy adopted Spencer and Sid(ney) when they be wittle babies... awww. Gabe and Mia have custody of Jack and Kayl. I think i got it right.... maybe.

Summary: It's the beginning of Winter Break and Kayl and Sar need something to do for the weekend. So when the walk into the kitchen at Kayl's and Seabass (hehehe) is glued to a chair- whodunit was it Jack, Sid, or Spencer?

Setting: Winter Break i don't know exactly where some where snowy i guess.

Anything Else i need to add?
Oh yeah
Ian is Red Alert.
Colt is Inferno
and Alex is Bumblebee.
Okay if you got this far and plan to go further please tell me what you think.

Prolouge... i didn't spell that right didn't i?

"SOoOoo what do you wann do this weekend, Sar?" asked Kayl as Sar packed for the sleepover they were having at Kayl's. "Cause Ian, Colt, and Alex are out of town until the day before Christmas Eve."
"I don't know Kayl... What are Sid, Spence, and Jack doing this weekend?"
"Uhhhh, Sid just got off being grounded soooo he's probably gonna be spending his free time out side. And i think Spencer got himself a girlfriend. and Jack's got a big science due after break and you know how he is with those big projects of his."
"Yeah,"
"Do you have any Hot Chocolate? I can go make some before we go cause it's FREEEEEEZING outside."
"Sounds like a good idea, i'll be down in a minute." Sar said.
"Great!" Kayl called as she bounded out the door. Sar sighed sometimes she wished she had her friend's energy. Though she really liked her common sense. O well.

THERE!!! The beginning of the prolouge. If you guys like it so far maybe i'll post more. I'm not going to be one of those people won't finish it. Why because i have it finished.... i just need to type.

IF you want to question my sanity you may do so just, please watch this french commercial first. Question their sanity.